to be to be to be (a slight rewrite)

Posted on January 3, 2013 by hugr5

TO BE…

To be ravaged …

delicate brush strokes
against my skin,
fragile finger fan quivering
near my face,
tiny white prayer books(s) opening,
blindfolding, then disappearing,
and a lush warm wind …

To be ravaged …

by a butterfly.

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2 thoughts on “to be to be to be (a slight rewrite)”

Margot Kinberg on January 3, 2013 at 2:57 pm said:

Oh, I like this version!

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- hugr5 on January 3, 2013 at 9:10 pm said:
  
  thanks. I didn’t change much, but I think the physical format is very important!
  
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